Angela Doyle
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Hi. I’m looking for some feedback on all aspects please. The client is looking for a calm, peaceful sounding voice for this biblical reading. Thanks in advance!
DAFC–it felt like you weren’t into it nearly as much as for Retail Explainer. I liked the energy in the latter. I felt like you connected more with the copy in DAFC as you went along, but the first couple of lines didn’t grab me very much.
I like your voice.
Hi, everyone! Me again preparing for my next narration coaching session. I’d love to hear feedback on these 2 spots please! Does it flow or is it choppy? Is it engaging? Thank you so much.
That was awesome! My one nit was re: “Here’s how it works”. “Here’s” wasn’t quite as clear as I personally would have liked; it was dragged out a bit, but otherwise, I REALLY liked this!
Thirst–I was expecting to hear a more lighthearted approach during “you’re not thinking about it at all”–just minding your own business, la dee dah, and then suddenly desperation in “until it’s all you can think about…brain screams…”, and then maybe a change in tone to a more factual one halfway through as you begin to describe the list of effects of dehydration (after a bit more of a pause to emphasize the switch).
GNH–you definitely hit the friendly but authoritative mark!
Nicely done.
I usually try not to read other people’s feedback before I post mine, but somehow read Tim’s first, but I totally agree with him on all of his points aside from clicking (I didn’t notice it). I do love the different sounds for the 2!
I like both takes, but I prefer the beginning of take #1 more than #2 because #2 sounds SUPER annoyed. I know it’s supposed to sound annoyed and frustrated, but it turned me off a bit since it was VERY annoyed. There was a bit too much attitude for me, especially “there’s gotta be one near ya”. Aside from that (and that’s just me, of course), nice read!
