[Andrew Jackson]

You have a very pleasing voice to listen to! One thought I had during your read, was that the pace could be quickened a bit. You are clear and understandable, but I bet if you can speed up the read a bit you can still keep those points. Toward the end when reading the number prompts, it seemed a bit choppy. You may want to try and adjust the pauses in each phrase so that there is no breath break. For example, something like “if you would like to leave a message (no pause) please press two now”. Great job!

[Andrew Jackson]

I really like your tone. The breathy feel at the end of phrases conveys a tone of empathy and trust. I especially like the way you handled the list at the end of the read. I think the music is okay, but it seemed a bit more upbeat than I was expecting. You conveyed a calm empathetic tone, so if you do decide to change music, perhaps something a bit more relaxed could fit better. Just my thoughts, but I really like your read!

[Andrew Jackson]

Hey everyone! My biggest challenge has been moving from a more “announcer” read to a more conversational tone. It is still definitely a work in progress, but let me know your thoughts. The first is an in-show narration read and the second is a more self-help style read.

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