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  • in reply to: Feedback Forum #81000
    Alli
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    Although I think you had a great read and tone for the scrips you have chosen, I would be careful to make sure you are pronouncing the “d” at the end of your words (I get this feedback from my coach a lot too and do understand the awkwardness of it). Otherwise, I hear nothing wrong with your accents and thinks it gives it more character in your reads!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #80999
    Alli
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    Hey! I would say you had a pretty good and clear read.. My only suggestion would be to slow down your pace so that your listener would have time to absorb the information

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #80998
    Alli
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    For some reason my uploading got a bit weird and i couldnt delete the extra uploads. There should only be 2 files, there are no differences with the multiple uploads

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #80990
    Alli
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    Hello Everyone,
    Im working on my narration reads and would appreciate some feedback. Ive been working on my pacing by slowing down in my reads without adding global stops as well as my diction. How did i do?

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    in reply to: Feedback Forum #78232
    Alli
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    Both reads were really good. They sounded very clear and natural flowing, especially for 711. You have good inflection that keeps the script alive. I think youre doing great

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #77421
    Alli
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    Just scheduled a session with Pen-Pen!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #77377
    Alli
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    I really appreciate your feedback. I was actually saying rinsewell and didnt know it, so thanks for catching that! I will keep the pauses in mind as well, I was told to slow down my pace, so Im still finding that balance but I will definitely be practicing my audio edits by editing out those pauses.

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #77376
    Alli
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    I will have to play around with the audio a bit more but I really appreciate your feedback! Thanks!

    in reply to: Feedback Forum #77343
    Alli
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    Hello, Im practicing my VO and would love some feedback. I know my audio is terrible but aside from that please let me know how Im doing with my narration vocals. If you can please me know how Im doing with: my diction and articulation, my pacing, delivery, and if my voice matches this narration script.

    I understand that I sound pretty young and youthful but I am almost 30yrs old, and after getting used to hearing my own voice, Im still trying to find my niche. Thanks!

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