[ajcarste]

Hello monibr16,
I think the reading is very familiar. I’m curious to learn more about the solution when you say “problem” … When you say the Olay body for the first time I think it could be a little bit more sure about the fact you found the solution, but the looseness doesn’t need to go.

I hope this helps,
Andrew

[ajcarste]

Hello Bruce,
The reading has a nice tone. I hear it going in and out though. I think it might be stronger if the volume was constant.
I hope this helps,
Andrew

[ajcarste]

Hello Everyone,

Here are three more takes of my recordings. I am hoping these are cleaner or more polished. I am still working on my recording space so there might be background noise.

Thank you for your feedback,
Andrew

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[ajcarste]

I thought your reading sounded very familiar and inviting. It was calming to listen to. Thank you for the listen,
Andrew

[ajcarste]

I like the energy you have in the Excellence reading. There is good variety in the list of words. It’s overall engaging and vibrant.
I like the depth your voice has in the Movie reading, I think there should be a little more consistency though in the accent.
I hope this helps!
Andrew

[ajcarste]

Hi there,

I am trying out the “introverts” reading and would like to see if this is relatable. I am hoping on the design reading is conversational.

Thank you so much for your feedback,
Andrew

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[ajcarste]

Hi Jmacdotorg,

I thought the distributors reading had a good tone to it. It was a little fast for me, but I may be wrong with that perspective. It might be good to go fast. I am not sure.
I liked how relaxed, yet emphasized the poem reading was.

I hope these help,
Andrew

[ajcarste]

Hi Steve,

I liked how you said “finally” in the Honey Bunches of Oats reading.
I think the “I didn’t think so” had a good attitude to it in the Spotify reading.
“The people you shared your music with” sounded authentic in the last reading.

I hope these help,
Andrew

[ajcarste]

Hi there,
I have three new recordings. I am hoping to receive feedback to see if these are conversational.

Thank you,
Andrew

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[ajcarste]

Hi Earthbu,
I think its a really nice recording. There is a a hesitancy in the voice which is calming. I think there could be better background music which matches the voice recording.
I hope this helps,
Andrew

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