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Hello Rosy

I wish I could critique better but I absolutely didn’t even hear a problem with this read. If I was speaking technical then I guess I heard a few pops in there but other than that it was GREAT!

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Hi Marco

I absolutely LOVE your voice! I listened to the history channel recording. I thought your tone definitely went well with the script. However, I believe the pauses in between the words were to long. If this was for a sleep commercial then I would love the pauses, but because it’s a history channel I believe there should be less pause in between. Hope that makes sense.

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Hi guys here is another homework assignment. I have a cold but still please fill free to critique me. Thanks

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Hi everyone.
This is my first homework assignment to record a commercial and upload it on the forum. I would love to get some feedback from some of my fellow actors/ actresses. Thanks in advance.

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Hi Roxy!!

On Hello User I kind of wanted your voice to be a little bit more upbeat but soothing at the same time. Not sure if that makes sense. The recording sounded a little too sleepy but it could’ve just used a little more tune to get me more interested into wanting to reset my password. Hope this makes sense.

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Hi Steve!

I loved this read. It actually sold me the product. Your voice captured my attention. It didn’t sound ready at all.
Keep up the good work!

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