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Amanda Johnson
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Hi Everyone!

My name is Amanda, I live in Silverthorne, Colorado. I’m just getting started with my Edge Studio coaching and am excited about the possibility of a career in voice over work! I am focusing in the areas of narration and commercial. I’m currently working towards completing my narration demo, so am uploading two narration recordings here that I would love your input on. The first is Documentary and the second is a Corporate/Website Greeting. I would greatly appreciate your feedback, specifically: Is my pace easy to listen to? (Not too fast or choppy?); Am I emphasizing the right words? Am I conversational enough? Am I painting a clear picture for the reader?

Please provide only creative feedback, as I don’t have my home studio set up and am using my phone voice recorder.

Thank you! I look forward to your feedback and providing you with the same!

-Amanda

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