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Terra Ashe

Another nice tone! Definitely a mouth full of a script with fun for kids but so much sale info so a hard script. Try really just focusing on one person you are specifically talking to. Maybe a friend or family member that has a kid, whatever works for you. It may help to connect the informativeness of the script to the funness of the pop up magic castle games without getting trapped in the wordiness of it. Good job!