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May 16, 2023 at 4:48 pm
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Hi DB,
Your reads were great! Smooth, informative and good tone. I think you need a little bit more emphasis on certain words/phrases, such as the last line in Tough Mudders. I also really like the pacing in The Ravens. Wonderful job!
– Veronica