[BJ]

Hi Provocaleric,

I realize you posted several weeks ago, but since you took the time to offer me feedback, I thought the least I could do would be to return the favor.

You really bring this copy to life with your warm voice, pitch variety and delivery. If this is to be a video documentary narration, you’d likely want to slow down a bit for the visuals. Doing so will also allow you to further “play up” your open and close.

Looking forward to your next post,

BJ