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January 7, 2023 at 5:43 pm
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Aetna/US Healthcare: Your pace, naturalness, and diction are excellent! Very nice job.
Black Diamond: To be blunt, you sound like you’re reading. You also sound like you’re trying a bit too hard to sound excited which makes it sound not entirely believable. If you could figure out a way apply the same style you used for the Aetna/US Healthcare script to the Black Diamond script you would probably get the end result you want.
Best of luck.