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I agree with Hazaro, your voice has a wonderful natural resonance. I thought the natural jokey/amused tone in the Harvey2 clip fit really well and came across as natural and endearing. The Financial Engines reading was a good tonal shift for a more serious script. I thought the message of experience you can trust came through naturally due to your voice’s timbre. One note is that you may want to try to push through a little more naturally as you go into “using proprietary advice…,” but I understand that is where you took a breath. Otherwise, I thought the two takes were very good.