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I really enjoyed listening to these.
I think, even in your attempts to make them informal, these are all very clear. I think the Geico one was very well done in particular.
On your DJ read for KATT, I think you need a cleaner break between each phrase, or maybe to take a deeper breath before you start. I can imagine that was a bit challenging considering how you’re changing your voice.