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Hi everyone! These are 3 narration scripts I chose to practice for my next session.

I’ve been having some issues with my editing software in terms of audio levels, so I’m so sorry if these mp3’s are a bit too quiet. I’m working on that but I wanted to get these out for feedback.

My main focus is pacing, I just want to make sure I’m not zooming through these too fast.

Any and all feedback is appreciated!

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Make yourself comfortable, sitting upright, with a straight spine. With your eyes closed, look at the point midway between the eyebrows on your forehead. Inhale slowly, counting to eight. Hold the breath for the same eight counts while concentrating your attention at the point between the eyebrows. Now exhale slowly to the same count of eight. Repeat three to six times.

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According to Google – consumers visit 18 websites on average – before stepping into a dealership.

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