[TimberTykes]

Hello, Esandyii!

First things first, I really enjoy your voice. Very nice and rustic, in my opinion.

In ‘Knee,’ I think the read was very to the point, although I feel that since it’s the topic of the narration and therefore pops up more often, ‘Partial Knee Replacement’ could do with more variance. Also, it seems like some words were running together, but that could just be me. I also like the way you said ‘particular,’ for some reason.

I like ‘A-fib’ much more! I heard more variance here, but I would probably elevate the first ‘ventricles’ and ‘also.’

Great reads, and thank you for allowing me to listen to them!