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Hi Grace! I listened to the Ozark piece. Primarily I noticed that you speed up a fair amount by the end, and you lost me a bit especially in the action-y part. Sounds like a cold open so, I imagine it does move pretty fast and I read that you cut time between sentences to make it shorter but I wished I could keep up with some of those rapid fire images coming at me at the end. The other thing I noticed on second listen was that some hard consonant sounds are a little swallowed up: the T at the end of “follows suit” and in “tread water” and the k sound at the end of “lake”. your volume is a little low in general but you have a lovely voice and these are mostly small details/quick fixes. keep it up!
