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Hi everybody! Back with a couple more reads. Definitely only looking for technique and performance notes, as I am recording on the phone. Here are some things I’m working on.
With the Corona Refresca spot, I was looking for the right pacing. Trying to find the heartbeat of the thing to keep the energy up. (I rewrote it a little since coolers are out and spiked seltzers are in.)
and with the NYCannabis spot, I was prioritizing sounding conversational while listing the very serious legalese/rules.
General feedback and notes are also appreciated!

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