[mikemcgann]

Hello Devin,

– I wouldn’t use the music in the background. I would recommend listening to it a few times then starting without it, or play it through your headphones but make sure the volume is low enough that your mic doesn’t detect it.

– Your pacing wasn’t too fast, but I feel the music suggests it should be even slower and maybe some extra time in the breaks. The music to me suggests there would be nature visuals in between the sentences.

– Watch for occasional mouth noises. Nothing too bad, but a few stood out.

You still did very well, your voice works well for this piece, so nice job selecting it.