[TimberTykes]

Hello!

These were great takes, and you have very nice and clear voice! Your diction was clear and well-pronounced.

If I had anything to say regarding flow, it’d be to make sure you’re enhancing your words, and adding variation where it matters. I can’t really tell what the product is and its properties (at first listen) without a little enhancement, telling me what it is. I hope that makes sense!