[Mike Thomas]

I really like the About Horror clip. The beginning made me feel like I was listening to an old episode of the Twilight Zone. Well done!

For the Atlanta Bread Company, I think more can be done to help me (the listener) visualize the food and the setting. You did it with “crisp salads”. The way you said “crisp” made me think about biting into a crisp and crunchy salad. If you can do that on the other food items I think it would be a win.

I hope that makes sense!