[Kim_Lomax]

Wow! There is so much great stuff happening here! I also love the pacing and the space between phrases. …”the true story of [space] Algona”… so good:). I have one observation and it may not even be a bad thing, but I notice that your ends of phrases tend to finish at approximately the same pitch. There’s great variety in the beginnings and middle sections of your phrases, particularly “and put to work in farms and factories and even in private homes..”