[Sylvanie]

Hello Everyone, Looking for some feedback on homework scripts below. As always much appreciated!

Blue From American Express

We are helping put instruments back in the hands of kids. Why? Studies indicate kids who learn music excel at reading, science and math. But Budget cuts are eliminating music programs. So, join blue from American Express to help put music back in the hands of kids!

Kid’s Explorer Academy

In his work at the Explorer Academy, a 12-year-old embarks on a global hunt for a secret formula that could reveal his hidden past.
Plunged into a world of critical missions and code breaking, it might be difficult—especially when he doesn’t know who he can trust.

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