[michaelflemingvoice]

First things first. I know I will be hearing your voice in commercials in the future. You’ve got the raw goods.

In Nespresso, just about every sentence was a downward side. It made you sound bored. Contrast that with the Downy that had so much more variety and musicality in your delivery, which made you sound fun and friendly. I’d try it again reading the Nespresso with Downy inflections.

With the Downy, I’d really think about where the pauses are and why. Maybe fewer pauses would help it flow and solidify your friendliness. Also, try ending it with a smile and shrug.

Your voice is beautiful. Keep up the hard work!