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[Provocaleric]

Hello Forum People,

I would appreciate some feedback on the overall sound of this read, thank you 🙂

What’s it like to go up one of the tallest thrill rides in the world?
A better question…
What’s it like to be blasted… down…?

Supreme Scream!
What a blast! New at Knott’s!

So Cal kids just 12.50, adults only just 25 dollars!
And don’t miss the fireworks show on July Fourth.

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