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February 3, 2022 at 2:16 am
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Hi Bevy – thanks for sharing this!
I enjoyed both reads and found they both had clarity and excellent pacing. I like that you chose two pieces of copy at opposite ends of the spectrum: one “techy” and one “warmer” and *more personal*. It’s great to show range.
Nicely done!