[Erik B]

Hi Dillon, I checked out your reads, and here are my thoughts.

Marker Crayola – you said Makers instead of markers. Need to diffentiate the adjectives more in the second sentence.

Cool Jazz – Differentiate b/w smoothest and grooviest. Also you hit Cool, but you should hit the whole name of the radio station, Cool 98.1 FM.

Overall solid job.