[Renita]

First, I’d like to commend you for the courage to put yourself out there. This is how we grow. 🙂

I like your friendly tone. I’m not sure of the order in which you recorded the VO’s, but as I listened to each recording, your voice sounded more natural and had more inflection that captured my attention more.

One recommendation I would offer is to emphasize the name of the product so it stands out a little from the rest of the text.

Keep up the good work!
— Renita —