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bnielsen15
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Hi everyone! This is my first upload for my Commercial VO homework. I would appreciate any and all feedback!

There is a little bit of background noise, unfortunately the computer I use at the moment is a PC, not a laptop, so the fans do come through. Working on getting a good VO laptop to work off of. Sorry about that, but thank you for listening!

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