[Sherry Newell]

Hi 🙂
Dove, at the beginning, check your first few words. Make sure to say to instead of ta. I have to work on that all the time as well, haha.
Keratin is a bit choppy (again, something I have to work on also), but I like the way you said “feel the love, love the feel”.
My life: there are a lot of pops of air going into your mic. To combat this, you can get a pop filter or you can also just turn your head a slight angle away from the mic so your air isn’t blowing straight into it.
Hope this helps! Good job 🙂