[Shmuel]

Hi greta,
Only listened to the first one. Sound is good.
There was some silence at the beginning, and I thought something was wrong with the file or my computer.
It sounds like you are reading. Get some acting in to it. At the beginning, when you are in trouble, let’s hear your frustration.
And then it dawns on you that you have this solution. Let’s hear that light bulb “ding” the first time you say it, like you did way at the end (which was pretty good, btw).
You have a great voice, and wish you success!