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Amitofu
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Amazing job! really really outstanding!

Only two things I noticed for posterity (and this is just me being neurotic and sometimes picking up on non-issues), is:

The second line “Introducing new Chicken and Pasta with Roasted Garlic from Campbell’s”
You read ‘Roasted garlic’ with like a slight extra emphasis that changed the dynamic just a pinch. made it sound a little more like a seperate item, rather than a flavor of the chicken & pasta.

Then later at: “[…] deliciously plump penne and rotini. [X] Home Cookin’ Soup that’s a lot more seasoned”
At the X, it feels like the sentences were pushed too close together in the editing process.

Both are complaints subjective and honestly not very noticable overall. I’d absolutely hire you based off of this.