[Brad]

Hi Tim! Good stuff here!

Solid clear reads, and I think your set up sounds good, and your lists are varied I can hear the choice making (not in a bad way)

I’m a little new to narration so please take my feedback with a grain of salt.

for 4H you appear to have a sort of either natural or added (i’m not sure) sort of up and down flow to your speech. I might try to limit the operative words picked in a sentence to help limit the up and down flow. Example ‘It BEGAN with the SEED of an IDEA’ Try just just one or two as operative. example “It BEGAN with the seed of an idea” This may help to make your flow a little smoother and allow a quicker tempo if that is what you were after

I would track this same idea for the other two, looking at where you can tone down some operatives with flow. Again just ideas. I think you obviously know your voice and copy best.

Again great work!