[JasonCawley]

Hello,

Any feedback is appreciated. Working towards that conversational feel while maintaining a clear voice.

So what is the fate of the universe? how will it all end? Cosmologists have thought about this for a long time. Many have come to the conclusion that the end will come in more of a wimper then a bang. it is known as the heat death. and it begins with a decrease in the rate of star formation. looking up in the southern sky allows us to see a hint of this process.

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