[artyom123]

Looking for feedback on this script, it may sound because the read called for a 30 sec slot. looking for emotional connection, story telling.. what I can improve. I made 3 takes, Thank you all..

I heard the call
And I moved with a purpose.
When the objective is in front of me, my path is clear.
And out here, it’s no different. My mission has changed, but my purpose remains.
American Military University was founded by a veteran.
The faculty knows where I’m coming from, and where I want to go.
They made the mission and they’ve got my 6—
From enrollment to beyond graduation.
The classes and degrees are built around outcomes—giving graduates career relevant knowledge and skills.
After service, we start a new mission. With AMU, that mission is clear.
It’s time to start your next mission.

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