[TimDKietzman]

Hey everyone, I recorded another commercial script. How do I sound? Any feedback is appreciated.

Hurricane Harbor

Cool off at the # 1 water park in Phoenix
Wet-N-Wild is now 6 Flags Hurricane Harbor
Save up to 50% on season passes, but hurry – offer ends June 16th
Hurricane Harbor. Bigger, Better, wetter than ever!

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