[chas82]

Toque – nice job on these. As John said, the different tones you used made the reads distinctly different end equally interesting.

I’ll make two minor observations.
Script 1 – I hear a micro pause and a bit of uptalk on “Brewers” following the first “Old Tomorrow” which tended to separate the components of the brand name. I also hear just a little uptalk at end of first sentence when you say “flavors”.

Script 2 – I think you nailed this one.

Good luck with your demo.

Chas