[D M Ulmer]

Hi DS,
The recording quality of this take does not have that “shuuuuuu” feedback, or sound, or whatever it was of the last one. Much better.
I liked this. Sounds as if you are talking about your friend Jerry. Good pacing. Tone. Dynamics of your voice were good. The listener becomes engaged and wants to go with you on this journey through Jerry’s bio.
Nice job!
Dawn