[D M Ulmer]

Hi Elvie,
You have an ethereal quality to your voice. Light and airy. It is lovely. Some of the words here could benefit from more emphasis. You give some emphasis on no one, ever, and dazzling light. They could take more emphasis. The word “thousand” would sound more of what it means by sounding it out a bit more. The delivery is smooth. If there were video along with the promo the pacing may need to be a bit slower.
You do make visiting Venice sound like a lovely prospect.
Dawn