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Hello, Edge Community. I am looking for feedback on my read for this script. Feedback on both technique and audio are welcome. Thank you for your time.

Spec: Male between the ages of 50-60. Narration track will accompany a 360 video presentation on the disease state and effects of diabetic macular edema. The role is of a physician so the reading should be warm and reassuring to give viewers a feeling of comfort.

Script: Hello! I’m Dr. Meyer and today I’ll answer those questions to help you better understand your disease, how treatment works, and the results typically seen by patients who follow their recommended treatment schedule.

Let’s start by taking a closer look inside of your eye.

Diabetic macular edema, or DME, is a severe, vision threatening complication of diabetes that occurs when damaged blood vessels leak fluid into the macula, the part of your retina responsible for sharp, straight-ahead vision. This fluid buildup can cause the macula to swell and thicken, which can disrupt your vision.

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