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February 15, 2021 at 10:06 am
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Good work!
You do sound like a knowledgeable, trusted friend. I think #3 worked out the best, but the other two were also good fits.
Overall, I’d just work on smoothing it out a bit. You could try looking at the script, memorizing the line, and then speaking it without reading.
Nice job!
Barb