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AvatarSkinnydog351
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Hi Richard, you have a solid voice but I feel like I’m being read to. The end of your first sentence is neither a statement nor a question. Again at :16 “all we share” share sounds like your not sure about it. The copy is real “heart to heart” stuff, communicate it naturally from the heart and it’ll be killer!