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February 4, 2021 at 11:44 pm
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Hi Katelyn! Good reads! Both are very clear and straightforward, with good pacing and emphasis on key words to help listener understanding. The first one comes across as more factual and the second is a bit more conversational as you intended, really good!
Mary