[tomnunes]

Loving the rich baritone, docr15. Some comments: Lost the ‘t’ in ‘most’ and ‘costs’, sounding like ‘mose’ and ‘cose’. As with my comment in Butterball, not sure why the emphasis on the word ‘you’. I feel “…coverage you need” and “for a price you can afford” should be more attached. The latter seems like a second thought. Otherwise, you’re doing great. I’m sure your demo will be super. Good luck!