[Bill Anciaux]

Hi, Kevin.

A better recording setup would help me hear your performance better and give more specific feedback on your technique. Something you are probably going to address eventually. I think your pacing could be a little faster. In a documentary piece, a slower pace does allow time for the visuals to tell their story but this still seemed a touch slow. At times this has a connected, conversational feeling but then the slow pace and careful articulation makes it feel slightly condescending, like you are speaking to a non-English speaking audience and trying especially hard to be understood. You have a pleasing voice and I’d enjoy listening to you deliver a documentary like this one. Thanks for sharing. Bill A.