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January 31, 2021 at 10:40 am
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Excellent performance. Your pacing, tone, inflections, and articulation sound entirely appropriate for this script/genre. Well done. My one nitpick: for the line “The collagen’s unique shape, arrangement and spacing” you emphasize shape with your inflection and a pause after the word. I don’t see anything in the script that suggests this word is more important than the other two listed. If you aren’t already, I can see you booking work in this genre. Best, Bill A.