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January 30, 2021 at 9:25 pm
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Hi KBridges! This was a good read. I liked the pacing and the emphasis and pauses throughout. It felt like there may need to be just a tiny more of a pause after “stylistic decisions,…” to prepare the listener for what you are about to tell them, just my opinion on that. Good job!
Mary