[mkell755]

Hi Sarah, good read! The energy was really great and it was very friendly. I agree that the first 2 words “An Everypaw” ran together, I would suggest really emphasizing “Everypaw” here because it’s a weird unusual word to begin with, and you want the listener to know what you are talking about pretty quickly. You can then emphasize “Everypaw” again at the end of the script to make it stand out and understand what the product / service is that you are talking about. Very good!

Mary