[Official81]

Hello Amitofu! Your voice is amazing. Very nice job on all three reads. I did notice unnecessary pauses in reads 2 and 3 which caused you reads to not sound like natural conversation. It almost sounds like your reading, the pauses for punctuation seemed to long. But each sentence was paced well and your energy was great I actually did the Honey Bunches of Oats and the Sandals myself. LOL I think that if you read as if your speaking to a person it will make your reads seamless. Your Sandals read had the perfect amount of conversational transition between each sentence. That one was really nice.