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BrianWigginsVOBrianWigginsVO
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I like your tone…this could be a really good read for you.

Things got very rushed right after the laugh (which was a nice touch)…slow it down, let it breathe! And be more specific with why you are saying these words. With a little tweaking, this could be something on a demo for you.