[mkell755]

Hi Chas! I like the energy and enthusiasm here, good job! Definitely happy-sounding 🙂 I agree with Toque that as an alternate take, maybe a fun character voice could be used for the first part of the script as the dog speaking. Think of a happy-go-lucky dog just being a really happy goofy dog, maybe even throw in some panting after “best day ever!” It sounds upbeat and good as is, so this is just a suggestion. My coach tells me often that it is easier to dial it down vs. dial it up, so I totally understand not wanting to sound too over the top. Good work!

Mary