[mkell755]

Hi Kbridges, good read! It sounded very appropriate for elearning to a young audience. I liked the pace and tone throughout. Your voice has a calm and friendly tone to it. I would say that the first “don’t” sounded more like “don’t?” as your voice raised at the end like a question (uptalk). I do this a lot and it is a hard habit to break. Overall very good!

Mary